Concerns for Paper

I am most concerned that my paper will only address one side of the issue and not the other. I think that I dealt mostly with why I bought the purse, and did not focus on the reasons some buy it. Some people buy them so others know that they are wealthy and so they can be treated in a certain manner. Another area of concern is that I did not explain myself completely with details. My last area of concern is some of my sentence structures. Sometimes they do not flow, which is something I need to change for the final draft.